welcome back to school to all students. This is my first blog for this term. On Monday we had to write about what we did in the holidays. My holidays were fun here and there but it was a bit boring. But anyways Here is my writing about the holidays.
Seing other kids having fun out side and then im in side bored watching boring movies. As i continue watching boring movies . Out of no were my aunty and uncle came to stay for the night i did'n know what they were doing. Anyway my sister was making donuts and a lemon slice. I couldn't wait until the baking finished and then my mum said that i had to do something for her. Anyway's after that i was watching some more boring movies.
I hope my story didn't bore you to death.
Seing other kids having fun out side and then im in side bored watching boring movies. As i continue watching boring movies . Out of no were my aunty and uncle came to stay for the night i did'n know what they were doing. Anyway my sister was making donuts and a lemon slice. I couldn't wait until the baking finished and then my mum said that i had to do something for her. Anyway's after that i was watching some more boring movies.
I hope my story didn't bore you to death.
Hello Ataahua! It is me Mahina from your class,I like the way you welcomed the students in,I think you should check your writting before you publish your mahi because there are some mistakes like how you spelt did'n instead of didn't and how you didn't use any wow words.
ReplyDeleteSup Ataahua! Its Quineil from your class,I like the way you welcomed the students in,I think you should check your writting before you publish. If you like you can check out my blog https://kpsquineilt.blogspot.com/
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