in week 5 me and my class were writting Narratives we had two subjects called, The present and the snack. I choose the present here is what i wrote hope you enjoy.
One sunny day there was a boy named Ash that loved to stay in the house and play video games.
Mum walks in with a box and me wondering what's in it till mum gets a phone call the “mum said why dont u get
off the game and open it yourself”.
He opens it and a puppy pops out. I had a moment with my new puppy till. I saw my puppy only had three legs
As I saw my new puppy had three legs I threw him onto the floor. The puppy didn’t care till he found a red ball as the puppy ran and received the red ball under the dresser.
As ash was waiting for his game to load
Cj looked at ash and ash wanted cj to throw the red ball but then something happened ash
wanted to really play with cj so he turned off his game and
got off the couch and went outside and played with his new puppy.
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